Thursday, December 16, 2010

Onyx by Mychael Black and Shayne Carmichael

Onyx is a story of an experienced Dom and an experienced Sub coming together for their first couple of scenes.
In Onyx, DC's newest fetish club, Ian Vaughan, a Dom returning to the scene, is greatly interested in the crowd favorite: Kale Daniels. After observing a tense, staged whipping, Ian takes Kale for a private session of their own.

Can these two men form a bond that goes beyond the public sphere of Onyx?

It's a short story, and I think that's really too bad, as I'd have loved to see these two further explore their relationship. It was a nice little short, but I enjoyed the characters and wanted to see more.

BDSM elements:
  • Bondage and Discipline: Some bondage. And I'm sure discipline will come up, but it did not in these scenes. 1 of 3
  • Dominance and Submission: 2 of 3
  • Sadism and Masochism: 2 of 3 
  • Extra Point: Yes
As for the writing elements, there wasn't much of a plot, prose and dialogue were well written, character development was decent for a short story.
  • Book Rating: Onyx: 8 of 10
  • BDSM Intensity Level: 6 of 10
  • Heat Level: 4 of 5

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