Showing posts with label a Mychael Black. Show all posts
Showing posts with label a Mychael Black. Show all posts

Sunday, December 26, 2010

The Next Step by Mychael Black

 

The Next Step follows six months after the events of Onyx (see my review of Onyx here).

I think it would be okay to read The Next Step if you haven't read Onyx, but both are pretty good books so you may as well read the story from the beginning.

Here's the blurb for The Next Step:

Master Ian Vaughn and his sub Kale Daniels are back for more in this sequel to Onyx! Both men are happy together, playing and living like any other Dom and sub. For Kale, though, it goes much deeper than that. He's fallen in love with his Master, but he has no idea how Ian feels about him. When Ian books them a private playroom at a new club, Kale is thrilled to find out all his Master has in store. And Ian has a few surprises that Kale never expects to receive.


BDSM elements:
  • Bondage and Discipline: Good bondage, no discipline required during the day that this story covers.  2 of 3
  • Dominance and Submission: Yes.  3 of 3
  • Sadism and Masochism: Yum.  2 of 3. 
  • Extra Point: Yes
If you enjoy medical scenes then you will certainly enjoy the play that these two characters engage in. 

As for the writing elements, there isn't much of a plot, the purpose of the story is to show you a day in the life of this couple we met in Onyx. There is plenty of interest though, so it's fine as is. Pacing is well done. Prose and dialogue are fine. Character development is consistent with the previous book and is fine for the parts of their lives that we are privy to.

  • Book Rating: The Next Step: 9 of 10
  • BDSM Intensity Level: 8 of 10
  • Heat Level: 5 of 5
It was a fun (and hot) little read, and I was pleased to discover more about this couple beyond what we were given in Onyx.

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Thursday, December 16, 2010

Onyx by Mychael Black and Shayne Carmichael

 
Onyx is a story of an experienced Dom and an experienced Sub coming together for their first couple of scenes.
In Onyx, DC's newest fetish club, Ian Vaughan, a Dom returning to the scene, is greatly interested in the crowd favorite: Kale Daniels. After observing a tense, staged whipping, Ian takes Kale for a private session of their own.

Can these two men form a bond that goes beyond the public sphere of Onyx?

It's a short story, and I think that's really too bad, as I'd have loved to see these two further explore their relationship. It was a nice little short, but I enjoyed the characters and wanted to see more.

BDSM elements:
  • Bondage and Discipline: Some bondage. And I'm sure discipline will come up, but it did not in these scenes. 1 of 3
  • Dominance and Submission: 2 of 3
  • Sadism and Masochism: 2 of 3 
  • Extra Point: Yes
As for the writing elements, there wasn't much of a plot, prose and dialogue were well written, character development was decent for a short story.
  • Book Rating: Onyx: 8 of 10
  • BDSM Intensity Level: 6 of 10
  • Heat Level: 4 of 5

Saturday, October 23, 2010

Bound by Leather by Mychael Black and Shayne Carmichael

 
Bound by Leather by Mychael Black and Shayne Carmichael

Bound by Leather is another short story, and once again I find myself disappointed in a book that begins a really good story and then just ends. The character building was going well, the possibilities in the relationship were beginning to come into focus, and there was reason to hope they might have their first real scene soon. And then it was over.

Here's the blurb:

In the world of werewolves, to harbor submissive desires is looked upon with disdain. To be gay and submissive is a double threat. To satisfy his craving, Nathaniel seeks acceptance at a BDSM club...and is quick to receive it.

Master Raphael's interest in the beautiful wolf is quite obvious to the club's clientele, and it isn't long before the two are paired for play. Yet, Raphael isn't known exactly for monogamy. Could Nathaniel turn him into a one-man, or one-wolf, Dominant?

BDSM elements:
  • Bondage and Discipline: 0 of 3
  • Dominance and Submission: This is a dom and a sub, but the story doesn't show us the actual act of submission. The the wish to submit. 1 of 3
  • Sadism and Masochism: None. 0 of 3 
  • Extra Point: Yes
As for the writing elements, the set up for the plot was there, but the story ended before I felt there was a resolution. Pacing was okay. Prose and dialogue were fine. Character development was coming along nicely, and world building was okay.

I don't know how to rate this one. The writing was good, this is a talented writing team. But the story didn't feel finished. It just didn't feel like a good place to end things.

  • Book Rating: Bound by Leather: 6 of 10
  • BDSM Intensity Level: 2 of 10
  • Heat Level: 1 of 5
I liked these characters, and would be interested in a story that tells us how these men work things out.  

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